Wow look at all that writing! I like the way you have told us that she needed to blow bubbles to get down, because that paints a really clear picture of what is happening in my head. I hope you can come and read one of your stories to me when we go back to school. Keep up the great work!
Carlo you certainly are improving in your recount writing. It's great that you told the reader which part of the story you liked. You are learning to write lots of words. Keep up the good writing Carlo!
Hi Carlo
ReplyDeleteWow look at all that writing! I like the way you have told us that she needed to blow bubbles to get down, because that paints a really clear picture of what is happening in my head. I hope you can come and read one of your stories to me when we go back to school. Keep up the great work!
Mrs Anderson
Carlo you certainly are improving in your recount writing. It's great that you told the reader which part of the story you liked. You are learning to write lots of words. Keep up the good writing Carlo!
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